Week 10

Good afternoon.  Today the final is scheduled for the Friday morning class.  The Thursday class will take the final next week.  I trust most of you are ready for the final this week, but another week of review is in order for a good many of you, too. All students should know that the quarter ends next week and that any outstanding work must be submitted by then.

    For those taking the final today:  aside from any review work, you will have the whole of class to put the essay together.  No Internet use, please, except for dictionary references.  Use of the Internet, or plagiarism of online sources will disqualify your essay, earn it an automatic zero.

Next week is reserved for retakes and those who may be absent today.  Next week is also the last opportunity to submit work assigned in the last three weeks.

If you have any questions or issues involving the work required and/or grades, please communicate them to me so that I can clarify.

Week 9

To all, welcome back.  In class today we will address any remaining work/assignments and review for next week's final (unless you all want to push it to week 11). Because of the holiday last week, the profile is still on the table for Monday classes.  OR the following piece, which if you need to make up an assignment will also serve:

Essay (extra-credit, alternate, or makeup): In 350-500 words address an idea that you hold as an article of faith or philosophical belief, using narrative or descriptive examples to support and flesh out the basis of that belief.  Examples can be found (some 125,000)at thisibelieve.org.  There you can explore topics and examples going all the way back to the 1950s, when the project itself first began.The site supports an international forum of sorts on core values, and offers opportunity to upload your essay for publication.

The guidelines for writing the essay are much like those we have been following in class, keeping to 350-500 words in a voice that is personal and original. The following URL within the site describes in detail what the editors want in terms of style and development: http://thisibelieve.org/guidelines/. You may summarize and quote from any one of the published essays as a lead-in to your piece, though neither summary nor response is a required element of the essay. The topic you address should reflect your particular experience and corresponding beliefs or concerns–whether of religion, money, virtue, vice, growing up, growing old, love, death, sickness, health, the meaning of life, the nature of existence, the human condition, pleasure, pain, the fate of life on this planet, etcetera. Your statement of belief should be articulated in a sentence or two.

All will take the final next week, week 11. Any rewrites should be submitted by the end of this week.

I will post grades at ecompanion this week. Please check the grades posted at ecompanion to see what you may be missing and that my record is consistent with yours.

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I have posted below material from an earlier post to allow for review of English syntax and basic punctuation principles. I also include the following link to an article featuring discussion and review of the use of commas: http://opinionator.blogs.nytimes.com/2012/05/21/the-most-comma-mistakes/

Sentence Type 1: The simple sentence has one subject and one predicate, the base of which is always a verb or verb phrase. And in English, the subject usually comes up front, followed by the verb and other predicate elements such as direct and indirect objects. This subject-verb combo is called a clause, an independent clause, because it expresses a grammatically complete, stand-alone thought. Examples follow here:

Jesus wept.

Style has meaning.

Choices resonate.

What is the subject in each of the three preceding sentences? Jesus. Style. Choices. And the verbs?Wept and has and resonate, and some form of the "be" verb": is, was, are, were . . .

And in the following?

The house is surrounded by razor wire.

He and I fight too often. We cannot be good for one another.

After spring sunset, mist rises from the river, spreading like a flood.

From a bough, floating down river, insect song. (Sentence fragment here . . . no verb).

They slept on the floor.

The girl raised the flag.

Note: inverted syntax order: Subject follows the verb instead of preceding it. Lovable he isn't. Tall grow the pines on the hills.

Normal order: A fly is in my soup. With an expletive (which delays the subject) it looks like this: There is a fly in my soup.

Sentence type 2: The compound sentence has at least two independent subject and verb combinations or clauses, and no dependent clauses. Each independent clause is joined by means of some conjunction or coordinating punctuation:

Autumn is a sad season, but I love it anyway. (coordinating conjunction but preceded by a comma)
Name the baby Huey, or I'll cut you out of my will.
The class was young, eager, and intelligent, and the teacher delighted in their presence.
The sky grew black, and the wind died; an ominous quiet hung over the whole city. (semi-colon used, no coordinating conjunction required)
My mind is made up; however, I do want to discuss the decision with you. (semi-colon required with adverbial conjunction however)

Any of the seven short coordinating conjunctions can be used before the comma to join independent clauses: for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so: they can be remembered as FANBOYS.

*A semi-colon (;) must be used before adverbial conjunctions joining independent clauses: however, indeed, therefore, thus, in fact, moreover, in addition, consequently, still, etcetera.

Sentence Type 3: The complex sentence is composed of one independent clause and at least one dependent clause.

My man left me, though it was I who begged him to go.

Those who live in glass houses should not cast stones.

Many people believe that God does not exist.

Sentence Type 4: The compound-complex sentence has at least two independent clauses and one dependent clause.

As I waited for the bus, the sun beat down all around me, and I shivered in my thoughts.

Because she said nothing, we assumed that she wanted nothing, but her mother knew better.

She and her sister Amina are dancers, and they work at parties around town when they can.

While John shopped for groceries, two armed men forced their way into his home; fortunately, his wife and children were away.

Examples of subordinating conjunctions––those used in from of dependent clauses–– include the following: because, that, which, who, when, while, where, wherever, though, as though, although, since, as, if, as if, unless, et al .

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Exercises: Place commas where needed in the following sentences.

1. Today is September 11, 2014 and a Thursday.

2. Students and teachers will be busy this week and next for many are taking or administering final exams and projects.

3. The lab teachers including Mr. Fish and Mrs. Bird have seen an influx of students in recent weeks.

4. Many of the students particularly those concerned about performance on upcoming finals have been eager to review fundamentals of course material.

5. Mr. Fish a math teacher is working as hard as he can to keep up with requests for tutoring which tend to rise during the weeks leading up to finals.

6. Introduction to Math and Introduction to Composition are two courses many students must take each course is designed to build basic skills needed in general college courses.

7. Schools across the nation have seen an increasing demand for courses that prepare students for upper level work, school administrators have responded by increasing the number and range of preparatory courses.

8. To facilitate student success they have also increased the number of hours tutors are available to help students with work.

9. Students today are often time-pressed as a matter of fact, many hold full-time jobs in addition to their course loads and get overwhelmed by the various pressures and demands they face.

10. Fortunately, the Internet is being used as a platform for teaching sharing and showcasing the work and ideas of people around the world it offers students means of connecting with and learning from their peers wherever they may be living at whatever hour of the day or night.

Week 8

Good day!  Hope you are well.  Today we will pick up where we left off .  I will be returning any outstanding  summary/response works, and rewrites.  We will review/share some of the hypothetical pieces assigned last week and then move on to the character study or profile (#7), a piece which I hope you'll enjoy researching and putting together.  It will be due in class next week, week 10.

The Character Profile or study requires you present a "portrait" of an individual.  It includes the individual's background, and a look into their current endeavors, activities, interests, ideas and attitudes.  To put it together involves an interview of sorts, really a two-way exchange in which the pair members dialogue to come up with enough information and first-hand impressions to write the piece. The purpose is to bring to readers a sense of the background, motivation, and personality of the students pursuing specific degrees or career goals, specific skills and interests here at AiFL. It will be a chance to exchange personal interests and ideas with others as you gather the information to present the individual(s) with whom you share class and common pursuits and perhaps personal concerns and lifestyles. I imagine the audience as perhaps students and others in the local community or at other colleges locally or nationally who would be interested to know the experiences, concerns, and interests of college students today and something of college life. So key will be eliciting from your subject individual(s) a sense of the background and personal aims they bring to their school pursuits, and to bring that information to life in the profile. 

Some questions to ask to get your subject's story include the following:

*What's this experience or period of your life really about?

*What is the emotional truth of your life today? What feelings are you working through? What do you feel good about, uncertain about?

*How did you get to this point or place in life?

*Describe a past or current struggle in some detail to show the kind of challenge you know best.

*Who were the important people in your life? How did they influence or shape you?

*What are your near and long term goals?

We will cover in class how to structure this essay. In brief, it will involve framing your subject to support a certain thesis idea, which the life of your subject will illustrate. 

There are two ways of structuring the piece.  One is to introduce the subject in an opening paragraph, providing context and a lead-in that generates reader interest.  (See the introductory paragraph description below for more details.)  Imagine a target audience of your peers or some other reader group.  Follow the introductory paragraph with a transcript of the questions posed to your subject and the responses elicited.  Shape the dialogue so that the  questions and responses, from beginning to end, are expressive of the subject's history, interests, and future prospects or concluding thoughts on this stage of life.

The second way of structuring the piece is to summarize much of what you learn from your subject, shape the main story line around a theme, and illustrate the whole with a few well-chosen quotations from your subject.  The second way is the article or essay form, as described more fully directly below:

In the introductory paragraph, the writer must say something of the personal impressions your subject makes in a face-to-face meeting. We want readers to feel they are meeting this individual in person; of course the impressions are those you have drawn in meeting and talking with your subject.   The body paragraph(s) will recount history and current endeavors, any conflicts or issues the subject is adressing, and how they are being addressed.  

The body material is meant to illustrate  the nature of the personality and character of the individual subject.  Again, the pairs or groups will be talking and exchanging information in an informal flow of give and take as you establish rapport and commonalities and differences. You will take notes on each other, specific background information, career goals, interests, concerns, etcetera, which later you will incorporate into the essay. You will unfold something of the life of your subject to illustrate a point about students or student life today. 

Your conclusion will bring the presentation back to the central idea, underscoring it, and providing final comments. You may want to incorporate direct quotation of one or another remark your subject has made, as well, to give some sense of the individual's actual speech or voice. Dialogue or direct quotation is a dramatic device and draws readers into the presence of your subject. You may use present or past tense overall. Bringing a sense of the subject individual's physical presence is a means of creating interest and imaginative appeal. Description of hair, eyes, gestures, clothing, in some brief but telling way will allow readers to actually "see" the subject person as they learn something of the story he or she embodies in the role of student.

At the following URL you can see displayed a combination format of paragraphs to introduce the subject and Q & A to develop out and finish the profile.  http://www.nytimes.com/2014/09/05/movies/john-waters-riffs-on-his-50-year-retrospective.html?module=Search&mabReward=relbias%3Aw%2C%7B%221%22%3A%22RI%3A5%22%7D

An alternative to assignment (7)  involves getting together with another classmate to discuss an issue important to you both, airing your thoughts, concerns, and collective knowledge.  As a pair , you will google some very narrowly focused area of the subject matter to see what can be learned from recent reports or the opinions expressed by others.   Each of you will then write about the issue, using your collective research,  any important items of fact or opinion expressed in news reports, your own views and experience.  

         As you hash out the matter between yourselves to determine how you each see a particular issue, including its importance today and/or in the years ahead.   You will have to write down some of the interesting questions and comments generated in your group discussion. Some of these you will use to illustrate the issue and the range of responses it generated in your discussions.  Each of you will write your own paper and in the course of it show what one or more of your classmates had to contribute to the discussion.  You will quote, paraphrase, or summarize briefly their views.  You could even use the question/answer format for part of the piece.  Above all, have some fun and try to learn more about the subject and your classmates' experience.

Listed below are some of the topics I have received in the past:

1.  Threats to the environment, including climate change and pollution.

2.  The economy/jobs.

3.  The struggle to legitimize gay marriage/ gain equality under the law

4.  The high cost of education today.

6.   Technology: the costs and benefits.

7.  Fast food.  Good food.

8.  The costs of war and militarization.

9.  Culture / media trends.

10. Role models.